Alethea & Athena (double_dear) wrote,
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The one that maybe we shouldn't talk about

In light of the fact that we really don't have much idea what happened today, we decided now would be a good time to continue our commemorative multi-part series! Woooooooo!!

DN Angel

DN Angel is what we called our other favorite series for a very long time. (The reason we don't call it that now is that there haven't been any new chapters in over a year, so we just don't remember it as much. That Sugisaki-sensei...) Saiyuki was our favorite series that we shared with everyone, while DN Angel was our favorite series that was just ours. Not that we didn't want to share it, just that we didn't have the first two volumes for a while, and you can't have people start out with volume 3!

Our first encounter with DN Angel was actually a very small one. Our best friend in high school had seen it somewhere (I assume Kinokuniya, but you never know) and thought "DN Angel" was the most brilliant title he'd ever seen. That's probably the only reason we had any idea it existed when we really found out what it was about later.

It was October of 2001, and the Posse (then consisting of four official members) had decided to dress as Weiss for Halloween. And so, I was making a Yohji coat for our Yohji, when one of the girls two doors down saw me at work and remembered that we were studying Japanese. She asked us if we could translate her DN Angel manga for her, and that's where it all began.

DN Angel was the first manga we translated without taking turns reading it first. We didn't really think much of it; we were just doing someone a favor, and we'd get to read an interesting series as a bonus. We flipped through it a little bit (those who really know us will know that that is something we would never, ever do for a series we planned on reading for ourselves), and when we saw a few pictures, we were like, "Uh... what is this girl asking us to translate!?" But then we found out Dark and Daisuke's real relationship, and it was totally awesome and stuff. We were hooked before the first chapter ended.

We instantly fell in love with Daisuke. We can't resist cute characters like that. And not only is he adorable, but he has mad skillz.

Whenever we had to do something that was not translating DN Angel, we were wishing we were translating DN instead. We finished volumes 1 and 2, which were what this girl, we'll call her Veronica, had. So we run to her and we say, "Here's the translation! Do you have volume 3!?" And she's like, "Yeah! I think I'm gonna see if I can get it for Christmas!" And we're like, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

So the very next time we talked to Mom (who had been bugging me to give the sewing machine back for a long time) we say, "Mom! This is urgent! Dad's coming up to visit for Thanksgiving, right? You need to go to Kinokuniya and get volume 3 of a series called DN Angel and send it up with him! We will send the sewing machine back with him in exchange!"

Finally Thanksgiving came around, and Dad met us in the Cougar Cove with a care package. Members of the Posse can tell you how excited we were to receive not only volume 3, but volume 4 of DN Angel as well. There was much squealing. We started translating it as soon as we were on our own again, and the next day when we went to see Atlantis (a movie we actually thoroughly enjoyed the first two times we saw it) at the Dollar Theater, we were bored out of our skulls, simply because it was Not DN Angel.

And DN Angel was the other series that prompted us to apply to intern at TokyoPop. While we were there, we suggested they try for the anime, too, because that way we could dub Risa and Riku (it was already too late for us to be their Japanese voices), but it was not to be. Anyway, we were very happy to be allowed to be the translators on DN Angel. And the senior editor would come to us for questions about anything, because DN was a big fan favorite and she didn't like getting hate mail.

But then! Tragedy struck. Okay, so it didn't really. The previous senior editor went on maternity leave, so they put somebody else on DN Angel. Thinking about it now, I don't think the outcome would have been much different had they not changed editors, because it really seemed like the rewriter was the culprit. One thing the original senior editor had made very clear was that, before volume 1 went to print, the new senior editor was to let us have a look at it to make sure everything was cool. We're very honored that she thought so highly of our opinion. But what with stuff going on, we didn't actually get the copy of the manuscript until the day before it went to print. And by then, it was too late.

I think the main thing is that the rewriter was trying to make it funnier or something. Or she didn't understand Daisuke's personality. She seemed to be thinking of him in terms of "a fourteen-year-old boy," and not "Daisuke." She also made Satoshi talk a little more like Daisuke, and because Dark is the mysterious, magical being, he was the one talking all cryptically, like Satoshi is supposed to. That's just how we felt about it, though.

Another problem it had was that they took out the name suffixes. We asked the original senior editor right at the beginning if we should take them out or leave them, and she asked us which would be best. We said it would be better to leave them in, because as many of you who are familiar with the DN Angel manga might know, how people refer to each other in that series is very important. And identity and personality and stuff are like The Theme for DN, so messing up character voice and taking out name suffixes was a huge problem.

We e-mailed the new senior editor, and he confirmed that it was too late to fix it, but he'd keep it all in mind for later volumes, which we're pretty sure he did. We haven't read past volume two, which was better, so we don't know for sure. We did notice that a lot of the lines we thought sounded dumb were kept the same, and a lot of the lines we were proud of were changed to something we thought was dumb. One thing I do feel the need to point out is that Emiko would never say you have to be sharp and elegant (or whatever she said) "even when you're falling like a clown," because clowns by definition do not fall elegantly, and she would never want Daisuke to be a disgrace to the phantom thief line by being clownlike. Ugh.

Anyway, we know a lot of people who are enjoying the English version of the manga anyway (or were, when it was still coming out more regularly), so I guess it's not so bad.

On the translation difficulty scale, I think I'd give DN Angel a 1.5. There's always something hard in anything we translate, but for the most part DN comes very easily.

As I said, we fell in love with Daisuke immediately, so he's definitely a favorite character. But I don't know if it was playing through Kingdom Hearts that gave me a thing for angsty pale-haired boys or what, but more and more Satoshi became our very favorite. Athena points out that it was really easy to relate Sora and Riku to Daisuke and Satoshi (mostly because Sora and Daisuke have the same voice actor, and Riku and Satoshi both have blue(ish) hair and are evil-ish), and while playing Kingdom Hearts, we both agreed that, while we love Sora with all our beings, we probably would have acted more like Riku, stupid as he was.

Maybe it was that they got Akira Ishida♥ to play Satoshi in the anime. Athena says for her it was when she carved stamps of the main DN characters, and Satoshi was just very easy to work with. At any rate, we ♥ Satoshi.

Of course, all of the characters in DN Angel are ♥ (especially the guys, except for Hiwatari (not Satoshi--his foster dad)). I especially have to mention Kosuke, because he's the cutest ever. I want a dad like him. Only without the being gone for a bazillion years.

Hm... I think that's about all. There might be some other things, but some of them maybe should not be posted quite so publicly. But if anybody wants to talk about them on AIM or something... *wink*

And that's it for DN Angel! Oh! Except I have to mention Argentine, because he's also the cutest! Volume 11 is out in the States now, so everybody can see how cute he is! Unless they changed his attitude, too. Ahem. Be nice, be nice.

As always, if you have any questions that I didn't answer, please ask! We like to feel important by answering questions! And here's the link to our Saiyuki entry, which also has links to the Fruits Basket and Ai Yori Aoshi entries. I really should just use tags.

Today I'm thankful for having the Internet back, tags, dramatic close-ups, new boxes of tissue, and elegant Mimsies.
Tags: dn angel, multi-part series

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